Comments on: Is this Spanish piece (short) translated correctly?

By: Nubby

Nubby — Sat, 28 Aug 2010 23:56:37 +0000

4b. Corri (accent) rapido
6b. Hice jet ski en el lago
8b. Hice un viaje
9a. Fui a la cima de la calle (sorry for not placing the accents, but you did place them correctly)
11a. Bebí un refresco y vi MacGruber (to see is mirar, to watch is ver)
12b. Escuche buena musica y baile (you can’t say Baile a musica buena, it is grammatically incorrect, translated it means I dance good music, but if you say I heard the good music and danced, that works).

By: Paul

Paul — Sat, 28 Aug 2010 23:23:46 +0000

4b. Corrí rápido.

5a. Comí comida de Olive Garden

6b. Hice jet ski en el lago.

7b. Compré en el centro comercial. Maybe.
Compré el centro comercial = you are rich for buy a building

8a. Fui en un bote.
8b. Tomé un viaje.

9a. Fui por la calle.

12b. Bailé buena música.

By: Jim G

Jim G — Sat, 28 Aug 2010 22:37:21 +0000

Some are OK, correct the following:

-write fui without accent
- 4b: corrí rápidO
- 5b: comí comida DEL olive garden
- 6b: HICE jet ski en el lago
- 7b: Compré EN el centro comercial
- 8a: Fui A UN bote
- 8b: TOMÉ un viaje
- 9a: Fui A la calle
- 11b: MIRÉ Macgruber
- 12b: Bailé BUENA música (without “a”)
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By: Goodandevil

Goodandevil — Sat, 28 Aug 2010 22:17:29 +0000

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By: Maru_22_07

Maru_22_07 — Sat, 28 Aug 2010 22:04:07 +0000

Some of your sentences had mistakes:

4b. CORRÍ RÁPIDO
6b. HICE JET SKI EN EL LAGO
8b. HICE UN VIAJE
9a. FUI A LA CALLE
12b. BAILE MUSICA BUENA